Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 17 April 2020
my dads cool hair
today me and saffron (my sister) did my dads hair it took about 20 minutes we used water to slick it back we made troll hair by doing little pink tales and using water to stick it up thats all for now bye
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Don't forget to check your spelling Lily.😊
ReplyDeleteok but at the end of your comment wright your name so i know that is
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Hi Lily
ReplyDeleteThis is a very funny post, how long did Dad keep his hairdo in for? Don't forget about your punctuation when writing your posts.
Sarah
only about 5 minutes but we showed him the photos
DeleteThat's funny.
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