Friday 17 April 2020

a song i wrote

today is my aunties 21st birthday this is a song we wrote for her
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6 comments:

  1. Sarah20 April 2020 at 08:58

    Hi Lily
    Gosh you are very clever writing your own song. I bet your Aunty was so thrilled to hear it. Don't forget to use a capital letter and full stop in your captions under the video.... good job Lily.
    Sarah

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  2. Anonymous23 April 2020 at 08:44

    that was so kind !!!!!!!💖💗💞💙💜💛💕😭😋😎

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  3. Anonymous25 April 2020 at 14:22

    Good Job Lily I really like how you you got 1 song and then turned it into your own it was so kind that you did that.

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  4. Anonymous25 April 2020 at 14:22

    Good job I like the song you are very talented

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    1. Anonymous26 April 2020 at 12:17

      hey thanks. do i know you?

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