Thursday 30 July 2020

a argument

I strongly … believe  that we should be able to play with slime on the carpet
  1. slime is fun and i like to watch tv and play with slime at the same time
  2. Slime is only $5 or less 
  3. The slime i get doesn't stick to things so it won't stick to the carpet 




introdution

I strongly believe that we  should be able to play with slime on the carpet. It's not fair because slime is only $5 or less and every week I get $5. It makes me angry when the slime I get doesn't stick to the carpet and I still have to play with it on the lineno or outside. Slime is fun but sometimes I like to watch tv when i play with it. 

FirstlyI strongly believe that we should be able to play with slime on the carpet because it doesn't stick to the carpet. In fact, I have actually tested it.

Secondly, I  definitely think we should be able to play with slime on the carpet . because slime is $5 or less so i can get so many slimes and I can only play with it on the lino.

LastlyI still think we should be able to play with slime on the carpet. Because slime is fun and I like to watch tv when I play with it.

In conclusion I think we should be able to play with slime on the carpet because I am very careful with slime.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Lily,

    Thank you for sharing your argument of why you should be able to play with slime on the carpet. Your points are interesting and I can see the link between 1 and 3. It was hard to read your actual writing though because it has gone right across the page. Something you can do to fix this is when you copy and paste the writing in use Control + Shift + V and it will stay within the size of the blog.

    Keep up the great learning and blogging,
    :) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader

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