- slime is fun and i like to watch tv and play with slime at the same time
- Slime is only $5 or less
- The slime i get doesn't stick to things so it won't stick to the carpet
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 30 July 2020
a argument
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Lily,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your argument of why you should be able to play with slime on the carpet. Your points are interesting and I can see the link between 1 and 3. It was hard to read your actual writing though because it has gone right across the page. Something you can do to fix this is when you copy and paste the writing in use Control + Shift + V and it will stay within the size of the blog.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader