This week we are learning to write a good comment. We made Comix strips that tells you how to write a good comment. 💖💖💖💖💖💖
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 16 September 2020
Friday, 11 September 2020
Duffy Day at NBC
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I am a fairy
I chose a fairy because I had all the stuff at home so I didn´t have to go out and by stuff for my costume. I am excited about today because we get Duffy books and don't have to where our uniforms.
Thursday, 10 September 2020
Writing
Once there was a girl called Amelia. She had purple, pink and blue hair and she also has blue eyes that sparkle like the ocean on a sunny day. Amelia was 15 She did not want to go to school. Lucky for her school was canceled because it was a teacher only day. So Amelia did not have to go to school. Amelia's parents HAD to go to work so she had to stay home by herself. She was sooooooooooooooooo excited because she has never stayed home by herself before. Her parents left to go to work. Amelia just sat on the couch and watched tiktok on her phone for a while but then she got bored so she……
Destroyed the house. She is 15 she should know better but I guess not. First she ripped up the most expensive pillows, cracked the windows with a hammer and then rubbed all her slime into the carpet!
Then she just patted the cat and didn't even care that the house was destroyed. She got a text from her parents and it said ´I am on my way home. I will be home in about half an hour´. She was worried because the house was a mess and she only had half an hour to clean it up. She got to work straight away.
She sewed up the pillows, taped up the windows and scraped the slime off the carpet. The slime was still a little bit wet and slimy so it was quite easy to scrape off. Then the door wiggled. She wondered what it was. It was just mum and dad opening the door. When they got inside they asked Amelia ´How was it Amelia?´ Said ´great, I would love to stay home by myself again.´ Her parents said sure but it's time to go to bed. She replied ´okay´ and hopped into bed.
THE END
Wednesday, 9 September 2020
Wednesday, 2 September 2020
Tuesday, 1 September 2020
Cyber smart
We have been learning a lot of things in cyber smart through out these weeks and here are some things I have been learning.






