This week we are learning to write a good comment. We made Comix strips that tells you how to write a good comment. 💖💖💖💖💖💖
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 16 September 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Lily
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lexie and I go to Rawhiti school
I really like your cyber-smart comix the people you chose were really cool.
This reminded me of the comix I made.
Next time you could add some backgrounds to it.
Kia ora Lily
ReplyDeleteMy name is Aaliyah and I go to Rawhiti School
I really like your blog post The characters you chose were really good and also they match what your comix is about. Next time you could add some backgrounds and some more pages about blog commenting.