them all a round she was so happy. And 2 months later there was little sprouts and 4 months later there were pretty flowers . THE END do you sing when you are scared tell me in the comments?
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 5 June 2020
Friday quick write
Once upon a time there was a flower all alone. She lived in a filled full of grass. She was the only flower there. She would sing to hope that one day some one would grow another flower. She would sing this ¨Iḿ a flower full of memories¨. At night she would sing to her self because its scary by your self at night. but one day some one came round with a bag full of seeds. And they sprinkled
them all a round she was so happy. And 2 months later there was little sprouts and 4 months later there were pretty flowers . THE END do you sing when you are scared tell me in the comments?
them all a round she was so happy. And 2 months later there was little sprouts and 4 months later there were pretty flowers . THE END do you sing when you are scared tell me in the comments?
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