WALT: write in first person
I just woke up and the sun was rising it was a beautiful sunrise.
I sat on the grass and watched the sunrise it was amazing, then I heard the rooster so i knew it was time for breakfast. I ate vegetables and fruit which was yum. Now I am going to practise my jumping I love jumping I can jump up to 90 centimetres. After a while I get tired so I go home and have a sleep. When I have finished my nap my teeth are getting sore so I am going to chew on some grass. Okay I'm done, it is lunch time so i am going to have lunch. For lunch I ate apples and carrots. After lunch I go and perform my twists and kicks in mid air at the park every rabbit there loves my twists and kicks in mid air. When I got back I ate dinner and went to sleep to restart my day all again.
WOW! you have a very talented writing. could you next time you can make a back round at the back.
ReplyDeleteSophie