W.A.L.T use onomatopoeia
This is a made a 15 minute story just so you know.
I know a girl that has a egg that goes CRACK. She has a friend who´s dog goes KABOOM! When people break into her house she say´s GULP.
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W.A.L.T use onomatopoeia
This is a made a 15 minute story just so you know.
I know a girl that has a egg that goes CRACK. She has a friend who´s dog goes KABOOM! When people break into her house she say´s GULP.
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Well done Lily, you have used onomatopoeia. Could you add some more to you story?
ReplyDeleteAdd in some more detail?
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