Today I commented on Londyns Mihi for . If you don´t know who Londyn is she is one of my friends and she dose blogging as well. I said this Hi Londyn I LOVE you Mihi. I like how you put a mole and a cat for your last name. What River is that and what made you get interested in wings of fire? If you could change one thing from your Mihi what would it be.From Lily
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 25 August 2021
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Well done Lily, I know Londyn would have appreciated this. Keep up the lovely work :)
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