Monday 23 August 2021

My First Narritive

 W.A.L.T write a narrative

Venom vet  

One cloudy and ordinary day  there were  3 girls Londyn,Olive,Sophie, and Lily and a cat called Butters. That live on 123 baker street In a very old but nice house the third house down. They had very noisy and nosy neighbours named Joseph and Ashlee.¨Hey butters what are you doing?¨ said Londyn. Londyn loves cats; she wants five but Olive wont let her. Sophie is very meh she doesn't care about much, not even Christmas or her birthday!Butters has had a runny nose and sore tummy for weeks but Lily has not been able to take him to the vet because the vet has been busy with animals but today Lily could book him in.                           


 Lily and Butters are hoping in the car¨Are you ready butters we will finally find out what's wrong with you?¨ ¨Meow meow meow¨. Lily thinks that Butters said yes yes let's go to the doctor But Londyns not so shore. Finally they have arrived at the vet and Butters looks the most scared then he has ever been¨He's just scared because he's never been to this vet before I think¨ says Lily quietly. Lily,Londyn and Butters wait in the waiting room for some reason. There are pictures of animals' heads chopped off. Londyn starts to get scared; she doesn't want anything to happen to Butters.


This weird and suspicious girl calls them. First she asks what is wrong with butters or is he here for a normal check. Lily didn't feel suspicious about that because normal vets say that.Londyn said ¨He's been having really runny noses,wont eat and has been acting like he has a sore tummy¨. ¨ What have you been giving him for food¨ said the vet. Lily shrugged her shoulders because usually Olive or Sophie would feed him.   


 The vet said ¨ that's okay we  will look inside him on a x ray¨ Lily did not like the sound of that and Londyn just wanted to go home. ¨ Now I will start giving him a check up and see what will help him¨ said the vet Londyn simled.¨ Okay now here is all of my stuff to see what's wrong with Butter lets get started¨ Said the vet. ¨ so Just talk to the boss and you have to wait in the waiting room while we see what is wrong¨ said the vet. Lily and Londyn was not impressed; they  wanted to make sure butters was all right.  


 ¨Okay. They sighed. ¨Your so dum like a ugly self crying frog¨ Thought Londyn hoping the vet could not read people's minds.  50000000000,0000000 minutes later well It felt like that. ¨Here you go good as new butters give  this medicine twice a day, half a tablespoon and come back in two weeks time¨ Said the boss of the vet. ¨ Why do we need to come in two weeks?'' said Lily, annoyed. ¨ just because Bye pay  next time you come¨ ¨ okay fine bye see you in two weeks¨ said Londyn. ¨ BUTTERS ARE YOU OKAY WHAT DID THEY DO?¨ Lily and Londyn yelled. 

¨ Meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow¨ Butters said running out of breath 



The girls couldn't believe that they have to go back in 2 weeks because they don´t have enuf  money. 2 people in their household don´t work and the ones that do work  get paid hardly anything. The government has to pay for their bills and they have to pay for their food. There's only $10 in their savings each week. Lily and Londyn park in there garage Lily gets out of the car and londyn carries Butters inside.¨ Hello we're home¨ yells Lily



`` Hey, how did it go, what's wrong with him¨ says Olive in a cheerful voice. ¨ one we don´t even know whats wrong with him yet two we have to go back in two weeks  three we couldn't go inside the room to make sure buyers were alright and finally we don´t have enuf money¨ yells Londyn madly. ¨ okay it sounds like it was a really bad time but I can start a job maybe that way we will have enough money . said olive hoping it would make Londyn feel better. `` What job do you think you'll ask if you can work at” said Lily interested. “ I don´t know I will look tonight on my computer” said Olive. 



 Two hours later  the girls have gone to bed and Olive is looking at jobs. Sophie is out at the movies watching  descendants with her friend. Her friend Indi Olive only talks to Indi so the girls let them be. Then the girls all woke up and it turned out it was a DREAM!




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